
A long lazy night with music as company
Skipping the list of songs one after another
Finding nothing impressive as it used to be
Sleepless soul sees nothing beautiful as sleep
Laying sleepless with dreams of distant lands
Visions never seen before unfolds in front
Of the closed eyes and like magic you enter
Into the world of dreamers and dreams far
The chirps of evening birds, the whoosh
Of a distant falls, rabbits running home
Deers hopping swiftly, peacocks spreading
Squirrels eating fruits, sky pouring drizzles.
Walking down the less trodden mud lane
The night covers the forest and whooshing
Of the falls the only sound to be heard
The glorious moon on top of the hill
There seen was a yacht with the oars
Starting to sail along the flow of the water
Huge trees enveloping the banks of river
A tiny bridge bridging both the shores
Tie the boat on one shore, passed along
The little bridge and there you see a gate
Made of gold and silver glittering in the light
Of moon, without touching it opens to welcome
A fountain of water gliding like shining silver
A palace with the grandeur of the heaven
A door with a million holy bells ringing opens
Inside you get, there you see the unexpected..
Divinity of laying in mothers lap, finally I start sleeping.









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Beautiful:)
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thank u sana
Fabulous… Best of it is this, Sleepless soul sees nothing beautiful as sleep
that is reality. I keep thinking nonsense and some sensible ones until I finally get the blessing of sleep from sleep angel
Lovely, lovely lines, dear chummi.
Such a beautiful place.. Would love to journey to this Wonderland your words weave..
Blessed with silvern moonlight,
guided by nectarine Nature with her little-bird messengers
and sweet, innocent purity, through and through.
Would i need permission though, from the Princess herself, from the Lady of this haven to drop by…?
To heal with a dear soul,
to cherish this lovely Gift of Friendship,
to value the blessed here and Now.
;D Take care & keep musing, dear chummi.
Hugz & Wishes, minerva*
oh wow minu,
you can come along anytime deary..
that was a personal built dreamland
It is truly a blessing to have found such a sweet friend ma..
loads of luv
pramadhama iruku… you have a very good control on the language…
is it!! thanks DT
Thats really nice princess
loved this one much.. some of the lines are of top class
oh thank u for the sweet words of cheers
just beautiful and so DIVINE!
Keshi.
hi kesh,
thanks yaar.. I’m blessed
What a nice way to portray sleep and the lack of it! Generally, I sleep so fast and so long so I do accept the divinity portion of it
So, what was the inspiration behind Aiz? Is it the name of some princess in the mughal empire?
Destination Infinity
“Sleepless soul sees nothing beautiful as sleep” – Liked this line a lot.
Lovely poem! I would say this is a good spiritual experience.
May angels bless you